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Waiting, waiting, for the time to strike
Knife in hand, late at night
Hear footsteps, heart starts beating
Man apears, starts retreating
Waits longer, for his next
Thoughts about, sliting necks
Palms are sweating, patients thin
Soon he will, commit his sin
Anothers feet, walking along
Unknowingly, things are wrong
Young and fragile, this next one
Soon her life, will be done
When the time is right, he strikes
Taking the innocent, into the night
Muffled screams, never heard
If only she turned, on that curb
Knife now bloody, a body at his feet
Laughing so maliciously, down the street
This shadow has taken, a life with pleasure
Takes a match to the body, for good measure
Her eyes now cold, staring into the night
Endlessly-forever, a painful sight
©2005-2009 ~alone-am-i
:iconalone-am-i:

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Be sure to look behind you, when you're walking alone.
Enjoy

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:iconnuggetgirl:
sad but totally true!
ya..... it's good, the poem i mean lol ya... a little wierd right now

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The moving finger writes; and having writ,
Moves on:nor all thy piety not wit
Shall lure it back to cancel half a line,
Nor all thy Tears wash out a word of it.

}Demented Angel{ >inevitably cute<
:icondisorderedsunflower:
Cool. . .Really nice. Keep 'em coming boy!! *lol*

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:iconangharad:
i love it very much it is amazing :hug: *scuries off to add to favs*

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LOVE IS A LIE IT ONLY BRINGS PAIN ---- but I still believe in it
:iconshadowstarflame:
Wow that just took my breath away,that is really good. :heart: I like the emotion in it and the horror macarbe vibe it gives,this is truly an excellent piece of art. Definitely faving!! ^-^

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:iconalone-am-i:
Thanx alot :) ^.^

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Retrospective Is My Way Of Speach
The Truth Hurts.
:iconalone-am-i:
Thanx alot :D :)

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Retrospective Is My Way Of Speach
The Truth Hurts.
:iconalone-am-i:
lol, thanx =P :)

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Retrospective Is My Way Of Speach
The Truth Hurts.
:iconalone-am-i:
lol, thanx :)

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Retrospective Is My Way Of Speach
The Truth Hurts.

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